NICK'S ELECTRICAL TEST EQUIPMENT

I have this previous job experience , but I don't like the way "It SOUNDS".
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Job Electronics, New york , NY
Electronic Technician
• Experienced in reading and interpreting mechanical, optical, and electrical specifications.
• Adept at use of multi-meters, digital oscilloscopes, DVM and function generators
• Tested analog and digital circuits and generated test reports in MS Word, MS Excel and MS PowerPoint.
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How do I upgrade this experience I wrote , because this sounds so generic to me.. i am applying for an entry level electrical engineering job....

i mean i have seen people who has won awards and promotion after a few months in their Job. and i didn't get any of those , so how else can I upgrade my Job experience ? ? ?